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The Definitive Sony B&W Images Thread
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davemillier
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This is a nice shot. But there is a little more to be eked out of it. Consider a near square crop removing the empty right hand side and that little breakwater on the left. Then you have a simpler shot where the twin fishing rods echo the twin poles in the sea on a diagonal. Concentrated goodness.Gone fishing
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scho
Well-known member
I prefer the composition in this version as well. The breakwater in the original was distracting from the twin theme in this image.Thanks for the comment and suggestion Dave,
You mean something like this:
It's certainly simpler and I also like it. Don't know which one I like best yet, that will probably take a few days to figure out. Would be interested what other people think about it as well.
davemillier
Member
I like it better than the whole frame, but good idea to let it settle for a bit. Then follow your instincts, always worth listening to others, but in the end choose what works for you.Thanks for the comment and suggestion Dave,
You mean something like this:
It's certainly simpler and I also like it. Don't know which one I like best yet, that will probably take a few days to figure out. Would be interested what other people think about it as well.
