Off the top of my head, a couple of quick things. There is a timeless quality to a large format image with human movement. Harkens back to the early days of the art. I like that very much. I like the setting as well, which is also somewhat timeless (except, of course for the date of establishment on the door.
), there is a homey charm to it. Also, I like the relatively low angle of the shot. I like that angle of view, and it lends a proximity to the anonymous, and somewhat mysterious human element. I think there would be a temptation to shoot from a high angle here, which would add some detachment, and I'm glad you resisted. Like I said, my favorite of this series so far.